Chasing the Dragon by Mark Wightman – 2023

Inspector Maximo Betancourt is back solving crimes in sweaty bustling 1940 Singapore. Like his first outing, Waking the Tiger, Chasing the Dragon is full of colourful characters, lots of action, and an intriguing crime to solve.

In Waking the Tiger, Betancourt was struggling to investigate a murder due to the victim being an Asian woman, therefore of little interest to the colonial authorities and businesses. In Chasing the Dragon, his investigation is hampered by the victim being an American man, so of such high interest that many agencies want his demise ruled an unfortunate accident and the case closed ASAP.

Betancourt is supported in his quest by his circle of acquaintances, including his colleague-of-interest, Dr Evelyn Trevose, recently appointed the new Police Surgeon. Betancourt had previously pulled away from his feelings for Evelyn, mainly due to guilt – his wife Anna being missing, not dead – but he finds himself aggrieved that Evelyn has now got a suitor, Alistair Grey, ‘the Grey Man’.

As Betancourt persists with the investigation, he must face conflicts between different arms of the police, between different echelons within the same arm of the police, between the police and the army, police and the politicians, and the police and business interests. And then there is the colonial racism: “one dead American will make twice as much noise as twelve dead Chinese.” Betancourt is a Serani, Eurasian, which puts him on the outside of most circles, but at an advantage in some.

Chasing the Dragon is an engrossing murder mystery, Bentancourt finding clues – even a treasure map! The character of the victim is slowly revealed. We read of his infatuations, his addictions, and his expertise in archaeolinguistics – all of which could be motives for his murder. Bentancourt is, sort of, reading Call of the Wild, but those close to him seem to be reading detective novels – which provides texture to the dialog: ‘on it, boss’, ‘to have you bumped off.’

Betancourt is such a good character – he’s rumpled, a bit bumbling, and occasionally unsure of himself, but at the same time he is determined, dogged, and caring. He gets blown up, bashed up, reprimanded, and insulted: “Who’s that she’s with? Is that her driver?”, “[the man] regarded Betancourt as though he was something he’d just stepped in and was having trouble removing from his shoe.”

However, he has staunch defenders and allies. “Betancourt sniffed. The odour of durian hung over Quek”: His relationship with his Sergeant Quek is delightful, and their dialogues a treat. And some on his side are the women who shape his world: his daughter, his missing wife’s best friend, and of course Dr Evelyn Trevose. 

The plotting is solid and the mystery intriguing, with some genuine surprises along the way. Due to Betancourt’s contacts at the racing track, the port, the banks, the morgue, the opium dens, and his entrée into higher society through his warrant card and his past association with his wife’s family, the novel takes the reader through the gamut of 1940s Singaporean society.

Chasing the Dragon describes a ghastly entangled web of greed and privilege, including “The British, not considering themselves forbidden from doing anything they chose”. Betancourt remains an observer: “sometimes I’m unsure what the sides are, let alone who is on which one.” The enduring evils of the British trade in opium sit alongside the fascinating theories of the long history of the settlement of the island.

As with the previous novel, the women are not just adjuncts to the male agents, they are very aware of the limits on their freedoms imposed by their society – and how to take advantage of those limits: “I did my silly-female-forget-my- own-head-one-of-these-days act.” It is possibly Betancourt’s outsider quality  that leads to his being regarded differently by the women, who have preconceptions of European males.  

The writing in Chasing the Dragon is atmospheric: “Thunder rumbled, and through the window he saw clouds like black balls of cotton amassing in the night sky. The beginnings of a headache pulsed across his forehead, and he rubbed his temples as he considered his next move.” The mystery is intriguing and the historical aspects interesting – and it ends with the next instalment in view – I look forward to the further exploits of Inspector Maximo Betancourt!

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Take Two by Caroline Thonger & Vivian Thonger, illustrated by Alan Thomas – 2023

Take two is a random collection of incidents from the U.K. childhoods of two sisters, Caroline and Vivian Thonger. Vivian now lives in Aotearoa, New Zealand. Take two is like a catalogue of memories, complete with illustrations of remembered artefacts. The reader pieces together the sisters’ histories, their fears, their celebrations, their horrors, and the intergenerational effects of wartime trauma.

Take Two reminded me of Frankie McMillan’s My mother and the Hungarians, a collection of short, short stories about the Hungarian refugee experience in New Zealand in the 1950s – each story complete but jointly forming a narrative. Similarly, with Take two, the reader enjoys little gems of writing, which together form the, probably not always reliable, story of two sisters growing up in a dysfunctional family.

The forms the snippets take vary; prose, poetry, letters, menus, even scenes from plays – echoing the fragmented selections of memory. Some of the pieces are given a ‘soundtrack’, just as many of our memories are pulled forth by hearing a piece of music of their time. We read descriptions of properties the girls were moved to, of relatives the girls encountered, of trips the girls went on, their first dates, their major concerts, their intrepid OEs …

As we read, we also learn of the sisters’ relatives and their burdens, illnesses, and idiosyncrasies – Take two is as much their story as it is that of Caroline and Vivien – their daughters, nieces, granddaughters. It is a messy collection, incomplete but full. It is a great evoking of memory, and how it can make inconsequential things momentous, and momentous things just part of our remembered lives. I really enjoyed reading, and worrying about, the Thonger sisters.

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Resurrection by Roger Simpson – 2023

Jane might finally be making headway with a twenty-year-old case, when an accident sends her spinning into a strange world. Three months after the accident, she is surrounded by “strangers who somehow feel familiar” – are they familiar because she knows them, or just because she has recently got used to them? Are they friends, carers, guards, or gaolers? Is she really ‘Jane’?

The things that usually give us certainty, photographs and mirrors, are treacherous to Jane, and from amongst the characters around her who can she trust? Surely not “Doctor Two-Bob Each Way, Doctor Spin the Wheel and Bet on Red, Doctor Don’t Ask Me – I’m a Neurosurgeon”. And then there are the trips to the spaceship. Disorienting and scary. For Jane, spaces keep changing, getting around is not just a physical but a mental challenge.

I don’t want to say who or what Jane is – the intrigue is in finding out alongside her, and in piecing together the various mysteries she is trying to solve, both professionally and personally. The reader is given clues and guesses some of the answers, but the mystery/thriller angle wasn’t really the focus for me, it was the pleasure of reading about the complexities of the central character, at once damaged and vulnerable and staunch and smart.

I read Resurrection not knowing the Jane Halifax TV series or having read the first book in the series, Resurrection is #2. I am glad that’s how I got to know Jane – with her story for a long time hopping around like her confused mind. It is at once sad, “Lonely. Desolate would be a better description …”, and intriguing, “But how can you tell when a liar is telling the truth?”

Once the murk begins to clear, Jane starts recognising herself, but also recognising that she is no longer the person she thinks she might  have been before the accident. The various mysteries are solved: Why was she always thinking of a 20-year-old TV show? Why did she have recurring vivid memories that made no sense? What where the files she was collecting before the accident, and why was she revisiting that old case? Jane picks up more challenges as she struggles with her lingering amnesia, trusting only her instincts to judge who she should help and who she should remain wary of.

There are real threats to Jane’s safety and some tense moments in Resurrection, and the various mysteries are resolved in an interesting, messy, not black-and-white psychological way. There are lots of good solid characters, and Jane adds humour amidst her trauma: “Well, it’s easy for her to say; she hasn’t lost touch with herself.” She gives people great nicknames in retaliation for them calling her by someone else’s name. She summarises herself: “The transgressive mind is my addiction.” Resurrection is a great and unusual read.

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Double Jeopardy by Stef Harris – 2023

Frank Winter is a grumpy cynical ex-sheriff who has been working as a cleaner for the last fifteen years. He likes his drink and he “looks like Johnny Cash on a three-day drunk”. Detective Nunzio Arabito is a twenty-nine-year-old strategic analyst for the Boston Police Department, moonlighting one night a week as an Italian chef. He is responsible for the Prevention First programme and is idealistic about minimising crime and preventing recidivism.

Frank and Nunzio come into each other’s lives when, after twenty years, Barry Krupke is paroled from prison. Krupke has been serving time for the murder of one woman and the abduction of another; he was found not guilty of the murder of a third woman. Nunzio is keeping an eye on Krupke, making sure he stays out of trouble. He is also keeping an eye on Frank, because one of the likely sources of trouble for Krupke is Frank, the third woman being his daughter, Evie. When the verdict was passed, Frank was filmed on national TV, in his police uniform, waving a firearm and saying he’d gun down Krupke if he ever got out of prison.

Needless to say, that incident put Frank on the road to becoming a humble cleaner – although he says the booze was sending him that way anyway. But when he hears Krupke is out, and when he loses his cleaning job over an altercation about his suddenly non-existent pension fund, Frank has free time to consider whether to act on his historic threat or not. And Nunzio is savvy enough to guess where those considerations might lead.

Frank is racist – would never buy a Japanese car because of the war, assumes a black man would steal a camera. He is sexist, grumping that women wouldn’t do as they were told, using language such as “titty bar” and “two-bit street whore”. He is homophobic, feeling uncomfortable around gay men. But he loves his dog to bits, is relaxed with a transexual woman, and as we learn his back story, his behaviour towards his estranged wife Mary is tender and moving.

Frank becomes quite protective of Nunzio: “He should be a social worker – he certainly wasn’t cut out to be a cop.” Nunzio is a delightful character. He is humble, putting up with the banter coming his way at the station, and with being treated like a dogsbody. But he is persistent and very smart. He is also self-deprecating, recognising that he was being brave at one point because “the fear of being ridiculed overcame his fear of sudden death.” Despite his bravado he knows he looks “about as intimidating as Tintin”.

Krupke studied while in prison, stopped drinking, took a course on empathy, and worked out to peak fitness. He also started an online business: “Just like Amway, but with guns”, and is making good money. He’s clean, sober, and knows he can’t be tried again for the events of twenty years ago. But then he discovers Frank is still holding a grudge – and things start going seriously awry. Krupke has one thing in common with Frank – both “always had a tendency to rush in a little heavy handed”.

The plotting of Double jeopardy is great, leading up to a thrilling denouement, that makes Frank have second thoughts about at least some of his prejudices, and about his fitness. All three main protagonists develop through the book, some courage seeping from Frank to Nunzio, and optimism flowing the other way. Krupke realising the difference between the performative radicalism of his United Militias of America, and the messy reality of the field. And there are great secondary characters, and indications that some of them will return if Frank and Nunzio ever get together again, which would be a very good thing.

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Queen, King, Ace by Olivia Hayfield – 2024

“Britain needs someone to believe in right now” – its citizens still reeling from the aftermath of Brexit and the badly managed Covid-19 pandemic. Ace Penhalagon, who has risen to Wimbledon and Olympic glory, appears to be their knight in shining armour – “But yet again, time and fate were playing their twisted games.”

Queen, King, Ace is another wonderful mash-up of romance, history, social commentary and #YeahNoir, following on from Wife after Wife (Henry VIII), Sister to Sister (Elizabeth I) and Notorious (Richard III). Ace Penhalagon is “a little Cornish boy who knew nothing of his roots”, fostered by the mesmerising magic-wielding Merle, and with troubled foster siblings Lockie and Faye. Yes, this time we have King Arthur and his entourage mixed in with the lives of the modern Tudors, with a smidgeon of Plantagenet thrown in.

Eliza Rose, now CEO of Rose Corporation, with Harry acting as Chairman and ‘consultant’, is still grieving and guilt-ridden over the murder of her “soul mate” the “enfant terrible of the arts world” Kit Marley. Kit is still a smoky lingering presence around Eliza, and she is heavily dependent on Kit’s lover, Will Bardington, for support. Will also shelters her when she becomes involved with Ace, the online trolls and offline stalkers making her life a misery.

Eliza falls for Ace, and vice versa – both wanting to use the publicity power of Rose Corp to further Ace’s messages of tolerance in an increasingly divided society, and of positive action in a time of ecological disaster. Ace is keen to use his recently gained high profile for good, knowing the public have given up on politicians, yet still crave someone to give them hope.

Ace and Eliza’s plans are a worry for Harry, who fears Ace’s messages may get too political and put Rose Corp businesses at risk, especially when they are still recovering from the impact of Covid lockdowns. The tension between those who want to give the planet a break, and those who believe the only way out of the mess is to keep the accelerator on businesses to fuel the economy, is woven into the story, as is the anonymity of the internet facilitating the terrorising of individuals, especially women.

Queen, King, Ace is not all social commentary, it is a glamourous romance – there’s even a trip to the Met Gala, that annual bizarre fantasy parade. Much is made of the human tendency to hark back to a ‘golden age’, one that probably never existed apart from in nostalgic tales of history. Eliza and Ace want to (re)create a time of harmony and inclusiveness, complete with a “round table” of similar-thinking influencers, reported loudly by the media as a “QUEST TO PUT THE GREAT BACK IN BRITAIN”, but was there ever a time when Britain was great, or at least a time when it was great for everyone?

The plotting of Queen, King, Ace is very clever, especially if you are familiar with Arthurian legend. When a child, Ace (Art, Arthur) easily takes an ancient bronze sword out of a secure display cabinet. His sister Faye, a “neo-pagan and a wiccan” with a conduct disorder, falls in with the conspiracy theory crowd, she has a son called Dread. Lockie is a spookily beautiful surfer with a troubled past who took off for the antipodes – and who returns to appear to Eliza as a ghost on the beach, with a bit of a Kiwi accent, and a few words of Te Reo.

Once Eliza and Ace head out of London into “King Arthur Country”, the weather becomes atmospheric and drives the mood of the story: “Droplets of mist were swirling in the air, clinging to their hair”. They are drawn to a denouement in a cottage not far from Tintagel, and to a fate that recreates events through time. The speed of the recreation takes even the characters by surprise: “I just didn’t expect it to happen so quickly.”

Queen, King, Ace is a compelling read. I would recommend reading the previous books first, to enjoy the continuing stories of the characters. However, this instalment can be read as a stand-alone, with some backstory provided. It is both an intimate and a majestic read, with the mists of time resolving into an eternal pattern, which for Eliza was “as if she were seeing it all play out from the sidelines, as if she’d left her body.” And the resolution hints of further fateful mischief to come – here’s hoping!

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Gunflower by Laura Jean McKay – 2023

Gunflower is a collection of stories written by Laura Jean McKay. The collection includes stories written over two decades, there are short stories, short short stories, and flash-fiction-length stories. They are grouped into three sections: Birth, Life, Death, and they range from laugh-out-loud funny to truly devastating. They deal with the arbitrary relationships between humans and non-human animals, between humans and humans, and between humans and nature.

Birth. Why do we buy houses and coats for some non-human animals, and eat others? – “By the time Jeffries leaves it’s almost nine. Ed hasn’t defrosted the foxhound or fried the pony.” One story describes the ghastly lives of those condemned to a battery farm: “In the last days, the giddy, heady urge to birth slowed and then stopped and we shed hair instead.” There are stories of lost children – lost in the back of hooning cars, lost at birth: “Cara’s hair and fingernails can continue to grow in the hospital only kilometres away.”

Life. What do we deem important, what do we fight for? How do we fight when our governments take away our choices? – “Who hadn’t decided to haul-arse over three nauseatingly hot states to flag down an abortion ship?” And as governments take over control of women’s bodies, trainees are taught how to torture animals to make examining them easier: “The animal bucks against the stall. Melissa frowns at the cow. ‘I don’t know why she’s so unhappy today.’”

Death. The extinction of wild animals: “I stopped sleeping in the summer we went to the reef.” The extinction of domestic animals sinking under floods. The extinction of respect, the blurred line between the treatment of a wild boar and Sarah, a woman who goes on a boar hunt: “Ripping hooks.” The extinction of community, the Covid lockdown testing people’s willingness to protect each other. The inevitable extinction of all, yet meanwhile the exhausting cycle of trying to be on top: “When you’re in the state I’m in, the local waterhole is a good and a bad place to go.”  

Written by the author of the wonderful The Animals in That Country, Gunflower is a stunning collection of stories showing how cruel and selfish humans can be. The stories allow the reader to see familiar things in a totally different light, and to ponder that there must be a better way to proceed. Highly recommended.

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Bird Life by Anna Smaill – 2023

Dinah Glover has fled to Tokyo from Oamaru, Aotearoa. She is living in prime real estate Itabashi, yet her apartment building and surroundings are weirdly deserted. Yasuko Kinoshita fled to Tokyo from Sapporo years ago, she is beautiful, immaculate, and stylish, yet also rude and coarse.

We first glimpse the two women in an extraordinary prologue describing various people in Ueno Park. We see the two women, both in distress, yet somehow privately coping. We know they will meet; we know they are separate, yet they will be drawn to each other. “How terrible it is, suddenly, to exist in a story.”

Both women work at an engineering and science university, both teaching English as a second language. Dinah is one of four native English speakers, who are kept quite separate from the Japanese ESOL staff. She dislikes the work, and is offside with the English language administrator. But all that changes when she is befriended by Yasuko.

Dinah and Yasuko are both dealing with loss, and neither are initially completely forthcoming with each other about the nature of their loss. The reader gradually discovers the burdens the women are living with as their stories unfold. They are both fragile and tragic: “There was not much holding a person together”, yet they are incredibly strong.

The women cling to their daily patterns: “Routine was a kind of second-order magic” – Dinah sleeping outside in a park each night; Yasuko carrying tinned salmon in her Louis Vuitton handbag so she can feed stray cats. It was a cat who first spoke to Yasuko when she was 13, “‘Silly girl’, the cat said” – the beginning of her strength and her despair.

The men around Dinah and Yasuko are a source of threat, disappointment, and grief. There is Dinah’s twin brother Michael, who is an integral part of her. There is Yasuko’s son Jun, who she similarly sees as part of herself, and there is her untrustworthy and untrusting father. Tokyo is full of dangerous or unpleasant men, especially when clumped together in groups: “Yasuko was so tired of them. Deeply tired. In her body. She was tired of all the extra, entitled parts of them …”

Each person suffers in their own way, yet how miraculous it is when they manage to help each other; when they see others as useful, or at least as benign. The plotting of Bird Life is careful and rewarding, the reader finding out information at just the right time. The beating heart of the novel comes from the rhythms of the two women.

One of the great characters in the book is Tokyo, with its crowded subway stations and its empty parks. Its shiny basement food halls and its dingy hole-in-the-wall eateries. Its designer departments and its homeless. Its beautiful sunny days and its casual earthquakes. The contrasts are echoed in the contradictions and jarring swings of Yasuko’s demeanour, and in the confusion and insecurity that are part of Dinah’s strength.

Bird Life is an achingly beautiful description of how people deal with grief, with neurodiversity, with negotiating others; “Here we all are, sending up this light and warmth. It shouldn’t be hard just to leave everyone to get on with it by themselves.” The book conveys the enormous energy it takes to live with having lost someone, or something: “You could fall into despair about having lost a gift so young.” I really can’t recommend this book highly enough.

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His Favourite Graves by Paul Cleave – 2023

Sheriff James Cohen is struggling with an aged and impaired father, a recalcitrant teenaged son, a wife who loves him but who has left him, and growing legal and financial woes. Then local crime-writer/heavy-drinker Peter Conner calls in to say his son, Lucas, is missing, and Cohen’s life starts tipping into a black hole.

In His Favourite Graves, Cleave takes us back to Acacia Pines, U.S.A., the setting for his Whatever it Takes. Acacia Pines rivals the number of murderers in Midsummer with the number of its psychopaths. And the plotting of Cleave’s latest offering is, as always, complex and blind-sides the reader over and over again.  

Also as usual is that the moral flexibility of Cleave’s characters is contortionist-level. Motivation for bad deeds is presented as pecuniary, genetic, or medical. I was thinking Cleave had gone one twist, and one element, too far, in His Favourite Graves, until I looked that one element up, and as is often the case with crime fiction, the author had just done his research.

His Favourite Graves is not for the faint-hearted, its depiction of school bullying is extremely disturbing, as is the other violence that occurs through the text with increasing frequency. The novel includes teenage suicide and sexual violence.

Cleave manages to present the tragic side of events as well, the devastation of losing loved ones, especially children, to violence and the sadness of losing parents to Alzheimer’s. There is the irony of some crimes preventing others, or of some successful interventions causing worse crimes down the track.

The amplification of crime via social media, used as a means of bullying, but also as a threat to keep quiet, is cleverly plotted, as is the anonymity provided by the Internet, and its availability to those who know their way around a smart phone. The theme of intergenerational abuse is entwined with the complicity of some in the crimes of their family and friends. There is also the awful, and justifiable, lack of faith that adults will provide any protection for kids against the dangers of the world.

Cleave creates great atmosphere, there’s a large dark root-bound forest, a dank, abandoned sawmill, a small town full of the memories of past tragedies, a building storm, and an eventual deluge. “The hospital hallways smell like science class during chemistry and look like science class during biology.” The thoughts of characters, warped though they often are, make disturbing sense: “The world balances out by having only good things happen to some people, and only bad things to others.”

His Favourite Graves is a masterclass in letting your reader know what your protagonists don’t, letting them sit back and watch as the characters get into trickier and more dangerous situations. It is a stand-alone thriller, but those familiar with Cleave’s earlier work will pick up on recurring themes, and he has sprinkled his text with gestures to the titles of some of his previous books. He also plays with how crime writers get, and use, their ideas. If you are into hard-edged thrillers, read His Favourite Graves!

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Audition by Pip Adam – 2023

“I tried to sigh,” Alba says. “But that banged my head into the roof.” Alba is not in a good way – she is squashed into a small space getting increasingly smaller. She is with Stanley and Drew, who are each in different cramped spaces – the three can only communicate through walls and vents. They are not sure if they are alone in their plight – they do know they are on a spaceship called Audition, and that: “This is a beautiful ship”.

The ship is propelled by amplified sound, “It had only been used as torture before but it worked for travel as well.” They decided to rebel, to stop making noise to propel Audition, that’s the mistake they have made. “We were stupid to stay quiet”, because that means they have started to grow again – it isn’t their spaces that are getting smaller, they are getting bigger. And they were giants to begin with, that’s why they have been shot into space.

The reader pieces together Alba’s story, and that of Stanley and Drew. There are many others, other giants, other ships. It becomes clear that their original stories are buried beneath layers and layers of implanted thoughts, many from romantic comedies. “Does anyone know where we are?” Stanley says. “Like in the scheme of things.” They have spent time in an indoctrination facility, the classroom, heavily sedated. Learning to think of themselves as stupid, learning to “push the switches and pull the levers and read the meters”.

But life before the classroom is a blur. Until it isn’t, and the reader learns the awful truth. Alba and Stanley had fallen into state custody, Drew is connected to their stories. But regardless of their background, they and all the other giants are seen as different, so they are judged to pose a threat whatever they have done. They are being sent off-world. If they find another planet, they will die on it or conquer it in the name of an unknowing home-planet. Those left behind will be relieved either way, relieved to have been freed of an inconvenient problem.

Alba is a tragic figure, condemning herself, holding out no hope. “She knew she was frightening, was she more or less frightening without hope?” Despite her nihilism she yearns for connection, but who can she trust? “There seemed to be no end to the men they were left alone with who would rape them”. She blames herself for her situation, she feels guilty about her despicable treatment of Stanley and of Drew, but she sees all events, past and future, as inevitable. Audition is about how that needn’t be the case – maybe the system can be organised so it is not Alba who has to change, it is her environment that can change to be a place where “Everything is in hand. Nothing can do any harm”, and she can relax enough to feel hope.

Audition is a mesmerising read, shockingly violent occasionally, and wonderfully inventive.   

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Some Things Wrong by Thomas Pors Koed – 2023

Is the narrator imprisoned? Infirm or otherwise incapacitated? Is he mentally compromised? Is he a detained dissident, a barefooted tramp, or has he been imprisoned for fratricide? He seems aged and frail, we know he absconds at one point, towards the coast: “Any road’s a way out with a bit of persistence.” Or maybe we are reading his imaginings as he lies dying, or recently dead?

Maybe the main narrator in Some Things Wrong stands in for any one of us, stumbling through life without the confidence of commitment: “Shambling on out of little more than habit. Or lack of imagination”? The character is a figment of the author’s imagination, but maybe too of the reader’s – whose instinct is to reach out for a protagonist with a story to tell.

Beckett shines through the prose: “A road, a tree, a country road.” And Some Things Wrong reminded me of The Unconsoled by Kazuo Ishiguro, a flow of events that the reader makes fleeting sense of to form a story – probably a different story for each reader. In Some Things Wrong, I read of helpers, maybe carers, possibly warders. The helpers are distant, for we fear becoming the people we help. I read of a woman, also a helper – but is she of the same ones, or is she different? She has required medical care, and maybe she hasn’t made it.

While she is taking our man for a walk they meet another man – it is awkward. “The possibility of there not being a door is infinitely smaller than the possibility of there being a door” – did our man expect her to always be there to look after him, is he grieving? There is a dog, there has been a dog. Throughout the book there is reference to the fine line between what might have been and what is.

“There can be neither release nor escape”, our man seems tired of life and its business, or maybe resentful of them, but feels powerless to change his circumstances and lays a “curse on their prolongments”. However, I found moments of humour while reading – especially from the two people spying on the man and woman – are they the author? The humour not being in what they (he) observe, but in their pragmatism of describing it: “Some kind of hat” “With a brim?’’ “No. Not this one.” “Like a fez?” “Unlike a fez.” “A night-cap?” “No. Not a cap” “Then?” “He’s bare-headed. Stretched out on the cot ….”

“But nothing is more ludicrous than these attempts to take it all seriously.” The book has a narrative arc and leads to a denouement – whether that takes place on a beach, in the mind, or in Hades, I think is up to the reader. As is whether we exist in the same way characters in a book do: “There is no way that I am. There are only the ways that I am seen.”

I found a lot of Koed’s prose captivating: “The absence of a dog beneath the tree. A collarless dog. Unless absence can have a collar.” I enjoyed reading Some Things Wrong, and I encourage you to read it too … and see what stories you make up as you read.

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